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Critique...? weeeeeeelllllll, I'll try.
first, the socks look sort of weird floating about her knees like that, I would have either just kept it flat around her leg or folded it over. as they are, they look a bit...stiff.
(opinion: you should try to play around with line width, it makes it look really cool. In the pen tool I think there's some way to simulate pressure to make it look like a brush stroke. If that kind of thing's not your style than ignore this piece.)
just tryin' te' oblige yeh, missy. It DID say "advanced critique encouraged".
I will indeed use that setting (I know it's there, it just makes colouring fiddly unless i double over every line at 1px)
Thank you for your critique! *has a critique rave*